THE
FIRST INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPHE:
There are many
restaurants in our country.
I visit most of them, but I used to go to José's or Linda's restaurant. I
prefer Linda's restaurant more than José's for many reasons. For example, it
offers great services, better prices and the great facilities.
You can't start your thesis with For Example. You could say, I prefer Linda's restaurant more than Jose's as it offers ...................and so on.
ردحذفIn the second sentence , it's better to use the present perfect (I have visited most of these restaurants. Can you write it again but please revise it for grammar first.